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Aspect of Essay
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Standard
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Marked out of:
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Your Mark
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Comments
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Thesis statement
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Full marks
for stating your opinion clearly, and for beginning with a confident and
effective tone
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out of 10
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Paragraph 1
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For introducing
your city using obvious good points about that city, and describing those
points well
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out of 20
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Paragraph 2
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For refocussing
on one unique aspect of your city, which you support completely and which
becomes the centre of your essay
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out of 20
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Paragraph 3
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For anticipating
the arguments of others, and for countering
them with positive
examples of how your point is better
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out of 20
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Conclusion
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For ending
essay with a strong concluding statement (could be in last paragraph for
part marks)
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out of 10
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Writing Style
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Full marks
for clear and correct grammar and sentence structure, for effective use
of descriptive and argumentative language
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out of 20
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Total
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out of 100
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